Bits of fog, cold as ice
Tell the tale of broken dreams
Hurried footsteps, so precise
Nothing is as it seems
Beautiful faces torn apart
Red ruptured streams of blood
Terror stops the beating heart
Soft gasps always precede the flood
Of broken flesh and warm red tears
Falling to my knife
I'm the wicked saving fears
Quick slashes take your life
Unrepenting savage growls
Will emanate tonight
Inner evil, roaring, howls
My evil at its height
Each hallowed scream gives me strength
Each burbled cry more action
The cuts will always grow in length
To my satisfaction
Ripped dresses and broken corsets
Leave behind my card
Each one of these filled their debts
With limbs now frozen hard
The walls behind and ground below
Are forever stained
The hatred that has leapt, I know
Like a violent cloud it rained
Down upon the slighted whore
Who knew not her part in my play
My frenzied ways leave me more
Than ready for all the ways
That bodies can be made undone
And souls be made to cry
Though I'm lost I'm never gone
I can never die.
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A poem dedicated to Jack the Ripper.
It is a good piece, very interesting, but not a Villanelle
holy shit girl!! thats fantastic!!! and u like my stuff?!?! wow i am blown away by this piece i dont even know wat to say but "Addies!!" lol
i like the pic with this reminds me of spiecies
Lol...I wish it was mine...I think it was from devart, but I don't know where it is here, though...*grins*
I think you're trying to outdo my poem on Jack. :@
Lol...No, your poem just set me into action. I'd been wanting to write one, but until you wrote yours, I really had no motivation to write one myself.
Niice. Sorta made me shudder, y'know? But yes, in a slightly more coherant sense, very well written.
Thanks...I actually haven't read it...I never read what I write, so I'll just take your word on it. Thanks for the compliment, though.
Erg...That's not my pic...I uploaded the wrong one...I don't know who's it is, but I know it's not mine. DON'T SUE ME!!! I JUST SAVED IT ON MY COMPY FOR A BACKGROUND!